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To the Breaking Dawn by ~omnipotent-lion:iconomnipotent-lion:



Upon the breaking of the dawn,
the world will wake, the dreams have gone.
The sun will grace the dew-tipped grass,
and the nightmares of the dark are now long past.
The songbird in the yew tree will sing a keening tune;
and the sparrows in the maple will await the coming June.
For then, no longer, the cold will cling to daybreak,
and then, no longer, the sun will rise o’er frozen lakes.

For the sunrise in the peak of summer lives
and breaths, the grandest sight this world e’er gives.
To see the breaking dawn over hills of verdant green-
the most vibrant sight that e’er I’ve seen;
‘Tis the sweetest thing in all the world, I know,
to see the sun rising, and to see the winter go.
©2008-2009 ~omnipotent-lion
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NOTE: This is not a sonnet, this is an ode, but for some unknown reason dA does not have a section for odes...a tragedy, to be sure.

Another portfolio assignment...we had to write either an ode or a sonnet. This one is fairly simple. The octet romanticizes a sunrise and the beauty of such a simple thing, and after the volta, the narrator goes on to express a longing for winter to end and summer to start. This is sort of a cross between something a Romantic writer might create and something William Carlos Williams would concoct, with an emphasis on eulogizing the simple beauties of life. Yes, a sunrise is clichéd but my muse made me do it. =P

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:icongothiquehobbit:
Very good! I could totally hear someone read this in a Shakespearian tone. :D

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People living deeply have no fear of death.- Anais Nin
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We need to be the change we wish to see in the world.- Mohandas K. Gandhi
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When Life does not find a singer to sing her heart she produces a philosopher to speak her mind.- Kahlil Gibran
:iconomnipotent-lion:
^^ Thanks!

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You belong among the wildflowers
You belong in a boat out at sea
You belong with your love on your arm
You belong somewhere you feel free

Tom Petty, Allspirit
:icongothiquehobbit:
You're welcome!

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People living deeply have no fear of death.- Anais Nin
---
We need to be the change we wish to see in the world.- Mohandas K. Gandhi
---
When Life does not find a singer to sing her heart she produces a philosopher to speak her mind.- Kahlil Gibran
:iconilluminara:
:boogie: So, how many poems have you written?

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"As a nation of free men, we must live through all time or die by suicide." - Abraham Lincoln
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Junior Admin for *TheWritersMeow.
:iconomnipotent-lion:
For the portfolio? All ten. I edited a few that were already on dA too, and used them. ^^

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You belong among the wildflowers
You belong in a boat out at sea
You belong with your love on your arm
You belong somewhere you feel free

Tom Petty, Allspirit
:iconilluminara:
Ah, well that works. =D

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"As a nation of free men, we must live through all time or die by suicide." - Abraham Lincoln
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Junior Admin for *TheWritersMeow.

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