literature

Crush

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Literature Text

Whenever our eyes meet,
My heart beats
Just a little faster.

Whenever I see you staring at me,
My head spins
Just a little quicker.

Whenever I talk to you,
My world gets
Just a little brighter.

When you laugh at something I say,
My grin gets
Just a little wider.

I try not to let on,
but I still blush
when I see you.

And that’s alright by me.
Arg, I cannot write romance...


Edit:Submitted this a while ago thinking it was pretty shoddy...then suddenly it became my most popular deviation. Still trying to figure out how that happened...I'd love any actual constructive crit you may have on this piece! <3
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CiridaeWings's avatar
*sudden realization* ...oh, crap.
[Request] Ciel Phantomhive